Thursday, 23 November 2017

Describing Fireworks

This term we have been learning to describe fireworks:
  • use interesting words
  • use describing words
  • use our senses (what we see, hear, feel etc)
  • use a language feature like:  onomatopoeia, simile




Reflection:
I did some good words.  I used like or as to make a simile.  I feel great about my writing because it sounds good and it makes sense.  Waseema  24.11.17

1 comment:

Mrs Templeton said...

Well done Waseema, you have tried really hard to describe fireworks. You gave me a picture in my head of what they looked and sounded like. Ka Pai!