I will be successful when:
- I plan my ideas before I write
- I use quick pictures and words
- my writing shows ideas and details from my plan
I was thinking of my birthday and I thought of all things I did. I remembered.
The tricky part was drawing some things like the table. 10.04.17
Well done Waseema, you managed to follow your plan and write most of these ideas. Planning really helps you to make your story longer and more interesting. Keep trying to just use words not sentences in you plan. Mrs Templeton 10.04.17

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